Saturday, April 23, 2016

Poetry Week by Week: Free Verse Challenge!

April is flying by. Here we are at the end of the third week of Poetry Week by Week. And that means it is challenge time! Today's poem was inspired by the Mines of Moria scene in Lord of the Rings: The Fellowship of the Ring. I wrote it (and revised it a bit) while watching the movie Friday night. Whether you've seen the movie or not, I hope this poem leaves an impression. 

The Mine

Stretching
for miles
in deepest
darkest
paths under the mountain

a mine
a city carved into stone
thrived

its darkest corners
bustling
with dwarves at work
or feasting
or drinking,
malt beer dribbling down beards

until the mine
became
a death trap,
swarming with the foulest beasts

relentless
merciless
unstoppable in their numbers
unyielding in their attack
until
the last dwarf
scribbled a record
with his last
trembling
breath.

© Rebecca J. Gomez

If you are inspired to try this challenge with me, feel free to share or link to your poem in the comments. 

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