We are done revising What about you, Moose?! Yay! New title: What about Moose? I can't believe how much we chop-chopped from that story. But it is much better now. I sent it to a writer friend whose opinion I respect VERY much, just to get her thoughts on it. Then Corey will send it back to her agent. Hopefully the agent's response will be to take it on. We'll see!
Now, to polish up that bedtime rhyme and get it sent out to my critique group.